The Burlington Township S.D. response on the ObamaHymn (Copy-edited.)

I haven’t been paying that much attention to this “Hymn to Obama” thing – but, ye gods and little fishes: surely they can find a Superintendent of Schools with a working grasp of the English language. I couldn’t stop wincing. And eventually, I couldn’t take it anymore.

Mind you, the explanation is still exceptionally mendacious. But at least now it’s a lot more grammatical about it.

Moe Lane

September 24, 2009

Dear Burlington Township Families:

Today we became aware of a video that was had been first placed on the Iinternet which has been and later reported in by the media. The video is of a class of students singing a song about President Obama. The activity This took place during Black History Month in 2009, which is recognized each February to as part of our honoring the contributions of AfricanAmericans contributions to our country. Our curriculum studies, honors, and recognizes those all who serve our country. Both tThe recording and distribution of the class activity were unauthorized.

If you have anyone has any further questions regarding this matter, please do not hesitate to contact me either myself, or Dr. Principal King, Principal of B. Bernice Young School, directly.


Signature of Dr. Christopher M. Manno

Dr. Christopher M. Manno,
Superintendent of Schools

Crossposted to Moe Lane.